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EVE by krazifreak EVE by krazifreak
Two Months of procrastinating

It’s finally done for the most part :iconotlplz:

It was a mix of an inking experiment and paneling/storytelling practice

But I’m not very happy with how the other 4 pages came out
Especially with the 5 page, I left out an entire panel because I was unhappy with it (and it doesn’t contribute anything, it’s just the first page on a slightly grander scale)

The first page came out okay, though ovo

(Please forgive my terrible arts and inability to be consistent for 5 seconds)

I don't remember what references I used D:
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((This comic is simple, but it envisions just what might have happened. The way you portrayed the characters is great, and it also creates the feelings they may have had. This also shows how Ninten may have come to know the lyrics, and it also shows that even if it isn't human, you can gain love for anything. Hence, the lyrics in the song that has the word love in it. Eve had truly fulfilled her purpose, and also helped Ninten on his quest at the same time. You have showed that in this absolutely amazing comic. This comic is unique, and it also shows that some things, even though they may not look like it, will sacrifice their life to protect their beloved ones. This shows that George was truly thinking about his grandchild. This simple, yet short comic shows all of this in just a few panels.))
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Jamorson Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014
It's really good, but you forgot "of"...
Other than that, this is pretty fantastic!
krazifreak Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014
It's there in the second to last panel, although I may have made it too light

Thank you!
Jamorson Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2014
Ok. I found it. Thanks! :)
napalmzonde Featured By Owner May 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
So emotional. Thanks for such a great Mother comic~
Rexident Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2014
this makes me mourn, but it served its mission to protect Ninten
very good drawing i like
DrRevare Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I have to favorite this RIGHT. FUCKING. NOW.
Goudachizu Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Have I spoiled myself? I'm still starting Mother (1) D': Don't give a damn, this is lovely!
krazifreak Featured By Owner Apr 25, 2013
Yeah kinda D:

Good luck with Mother 1!
And thank you!
Goudachizu Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Haha thanks you too! :D and you're very welcome!
Drago-night Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013
This is why I got out of this fandom O'__'O
krazifreak Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2013
crazygoat20 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Transformerslover4ev Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This was awesome! This is great! Way better then what I can do that's for sure!
Tediz-Leader Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012
never played the game, but I think you did a fantastic job :3
syrupneko Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012   General Artist
this is pretty good. For some reason reminds me of the OUTERSCOPE segment of Vegetable Soup, a kids from the 70s...
HealerCharm Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is really pulling at my heart strings...~ ;3; :heart:
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